The way you’ve written this has transformed a two dimensional piece of writing and somehow given it the element of tone and accent, it has become almost three dimensional, in as much as the voice can be heard, the strength of the speech as it is delivered. I’m not sure voice counts as a third dimension now I think of it, so maybe it’s an eighth one or something. Either way, you’ve given it a power and a visible force that text usually lacks, leaving such things purely to the imagination of the reader.
I like it.
Can you tell?
Excellent. Thank you. I really like the speech (it resonated with me personally!) and thought it would translate better written out by hand
-The President and Founder
Keep it safe – If Bird Masked Man were to get his fluttering fingers upon it and read it outloud, I reckon most audience members would poo their pants.
Yes, the Man, Bird Masked Man. That old so and so, he got no time for these whining pansies loitering about in front of august institutions waving their placards and speaking profanely at the men and women working to keep this civilization from sinking down just as these same nattering nabobs of negativism dream about nightly, and pray to their pagan idols that it would take place, or something.
– The president and Founder
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